At the starting line for catching a grant proposal abt model of the relationship btwn education and satisfaction of marriage?

I scored well on my first mock draft of my grant proposal for a college psych class superiors. It would have been a great year if the teacher thought my sentence was more interesting … I'm not that interesting of a person if:) This is my first paragraph: " satisfaction in monogamous relationships is a major concern for many people in America. Although what constitutes happiness varies greatly between individual psychologists have studied a variety of different variables that may increase or decrease in overall satisfaction by assessing trust relationships relationship, quality and commitment. In the study of relationships, cohabitation has become a popular topic because of the increased prevalence of couples Unmarried living together in recent decades. .. so on and so forth "Any ideas to" spice up "? I guess it's pretty boring haha. Thank you!

keep it all, but put "Are you smart enough to be happily married?" in front it